In the contemporary world, people are experiencing high advancement and improvement in the technology, innovations and level of competitions. Supporting the statement that it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize because modern life is very complex. I have some reasons to substantiate my point which I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, science has accomplished high level in every field and enhancing day to day. Technology has already grabbed the people, now it is mandatory for the people to adapt this era of advancement. Cost of living and sustaining in the society has increased more in compare to the primitive times. People are fully occupied with the equipment developed by the science. It was the time when there were no requirement of phones, air conditioner and cars to travel. Whereas, these things are mandatory for the humans now. Furthermore, improvement and advancements in the technology are attracting more to switch to latest level. In past, people used to travel by public transportation whereas present scenario contends that number of vehicles should be more than the family member. Finally, where will it effect more? Cost of living has increased a lot and now people should manage how to maintain in this modern world. It is essential for the young people to have ability to plan and organize themselves accordingly so that they can sustain in this developing world. They need to plan for higher earning to fulfill the compulsory needs.
Secondly, people should take care nicely for their family members. In earlier times, people were having more number of members in the family and they were managing according to their time. While, it is quite difficult to manage expenditure of a child. School fees, cost of living and day to day increment in inflation aid the overall increment in the cost of living. Young people should aware of the complexity and plan for the family wisely in this market of competition. Simultaneously, they should organize well in their working field to achieve stability.
To sum up, I have many reasons to validate my stance but feel that aforementioned are self explanatory and it is noteworthy to say that why it is essential for young people to have ability to plan and organize in this complex modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 614, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...echnology are attracting more to switch to latest level. In past, people used to travel b...
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Line 2, column 631, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...racting more to switch to latest level. In past, people used to travel by public transp...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... were managing according to their time. While, it is quite difficult to manage expend...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245862884161 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.160756501182 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0401891252955 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496453900709 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12293144208 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0307328605201 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82521832314 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0591016548463 0.0309702414327 191% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00236406619385 0.00188951952338 125% => OK
Determiners: 0.0780141843972 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189125295508 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118203309693 0.0139019557991 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2318.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 386.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00518134715 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391191709845 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248704663212 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178756476684 0.174417080927 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137305699482 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82521832314 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497409326425 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.7174961029 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5454545455 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1382268883 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.363636364 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 42.4159208667 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.59433962264 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443471481925 0.300154397459 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0871569710604 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0570385225777 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489636813648 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175180861134 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177190772036 0.114077575197 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142230913972 0.0781384742642 182% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.46685121061 0.336927656856 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.167298992788 0.067059652881 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364460475272 0.210909579961 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103877502152 0.0618886996521 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.