Time can be person's powerful measure or a man's worst enemy. There are myriad factors or considerations that every one should take into account about spending time efficiently. I strongly believe that meanwhile people spend plenty of time on personal enjoyment rather than performing tasks that they are obligated to and should do. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side, the reasons will be explored in the following essay.
To begin with, the invasion of technological aspects to our daily lives is a vigorous measure, whereby internet and smart machines are now demanded to each house. An individual, regardless of his occupation, cannot live without access to the spider web, Internet is connecting the diversity of countries worldwide and transforming them to a tiny controllable village. Moreover, with the mysterious spread of social media, especially through adolescents, is a dangerous virus affecting the entire generation with various effects including educational and social aspects. No one can argue with the fact that surfing the net is the most enjoyable activity for almost all people and it is leading to waste of time to both workers and students who need to achieve their dreams.
Furthermore, from a psychological and social perspective, practicing solely the personal enjoyable tasks rather than the musts is becoming the popular trend nowadays, due to the fact that people are now feeling more free and with fewer requirements to be controlled in their personal lives. A teenager is now refusing any advice from his parents and guardians, even teachers in the academic field, they are losing the ability to engage their students in certain productive tasks that they are required to do, regardless of their preference and whether the job is favorable to their taste in living or not.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that spending time doing personal enjoyment things can promote health condition and reduce the stress accompanied by mysterious life events. However, still I affirm that spending enormous times on just personal enjoyment is definitely a waste of time and leads to unacceptable results. In fact, reckless behavior and irresponsibility is now inflating within the society, whereby wasting essential time for doing important and required tasks is increasing the count of duties and obligations of the individual, and thus this lead to more stress and squeeze in time.
Due to aforementioned ground, all folks should bear in mind that spending too much time on personal enjoyment would ab time, effort and productivity from the persons ability. This have devastating effects on many aspects of life including mental, social, and professional criteria.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'mans the worst'.
Suggestion: mans the worst
...me can be persons powerful measure or a mans worst enemy. There are myriad factors or cons...
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Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... time, effort and productivity from the persons ability. This have devastating effects ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33179723502 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90171125735 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.556563713 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.266666667 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9333333333 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279715911888 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089797983363 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904826195148 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1518830442 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703791902871 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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