In recent years, a boom in technology has made our life more easier and comfortable. Yet, some people find that cost of living has increased and one has to work harder. However, I believe that life today is easier and comfortable that it was previously.
The primary necessity of living, food, is sufficiently available now. Before a few decades famine was common. There were more children dying of malnourishment. Today these problems have been reduced to underdeveloped countries. With green revolution, enabling us to genetically modify the DNA of the seeds so that they produce fruits in copious amounts in lesser time and are also pest resistant, we have been able to cope with food scarcity, so mush so that we now face world wide obissity problem. In our grandparents time, though we had come far from hunting and gathering, we relied on rains that are unpredictable in time and the amount of downpour. This resulted in some parts of the country recieveing excess rains while other parts suffering droughts. When canals were laid out throughout the country and more dams were built to harvent the rain waters, we were no more solely dependent rains. Because of such advancements, there is copious amount of grains harvested and people do not starve anymore.
Varoius technological advancements like heater, AC, cars and internet has made life more comfortable. Heaters and air conditioners have reduced suffering from extreme whether conditions. We can work from home even in extreme whether, and can earn our daily wages. Travelling before was very difficult and tiring experience when the roads weren't made of concrete, cars were less common and journey took months. Trains were a luxury, although they took a circuitous route and weren't available in the extrimities of the country. Today, by contrast, cars and air travel has made travelling comfortable, less time consuming and personalized. After the advent of the internet, business has become easy. You can sell your product to anybody in the country who is willing to buy it. Previously there were door to door sales man who could sell to one house when he advertised to ten houses. Cash card payments and wide delivery networks have made this possible.
Thus, life today is far easier and comfortable than it was in grndparents time. Food is available in abundance and anybody with a decent pay can afford it. Luxuries like cars and planes have made travelling easier. Internet has had positive impact on businesses. Hence, compared to previous era, life is more enjoyable today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... a boom in technology has made our life more easier and comfortable. Yet, some people find ...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g, food, is sufficiently available now. Before a few decades famine was common. There ...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
...ufficiently available now. Before a few decades famine was common. There were more chil...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...d scarcity, so mush so that we now face world wide obissity problem. In our grandparents t...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...d scarcity, so mush so that we now face world wide obissity problem. In our grandparents t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252083333333 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.179166666667 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104166666667 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0458333333333 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0416666666667 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108333333333 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0583333333333 0.0351676179071 166% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77373256468 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229166666667 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00208333333333 0.00188951952338 110% => OK
Determiners: 0.05 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104166666667 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2564.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 421.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09026128266 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356294536817 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266033254157 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185273159145 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13539192399 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77373256468 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572446555819 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 68.4323290143 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5925925926 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.616881336 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.962962963 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5925925926 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.296296296296 0.644075263715 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 42.1959180083 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.5703125 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312967749889 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0793294961614 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0853715734649 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.386213591027 0.497263757937 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135246076559 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988596028691 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623156472421 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30505973346 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0654284538765 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223926990852 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322585496625 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.