Life is a changing process. Invention of different objects have changed and developed the lifestyles of people. Science and technology has made our life more easy and comportable. Therefore, I do agree that present life is more easier and comfortable than our grandparents used to live in when they were child.
Firstly, I support the statement because during my grandparent's childhood, technology was not evolved as it is now. They did not get the comforts those we get now to live a simple life. For instance, electricity was not available then. My grandmother used to say me, they had to survive the hot sunny weather without electric fan. They had to light candle during the evening hours beacuse no electric bulb was available. In addition, they used to survive the cold winter season without the heater. This makes me realize that, we are so lucky to have the electricity and the electronic devices to lead a cosy life.
Secondly, in the time of my grandparent's childhood, there was no available transport and communication system. It took a long time to reach to the destination. My grandfather told stories how they used to walk for miles to go from one place to another. He also said that it took months to receive a letter as it was the only medium of long distance communication. Now-a-days, it is much easier for us to travel from one place to another in a short period of time. Besides, we can see and talk at the same time by electronic phones and gajets by the blessing of internet.
Thirdly, shops, schools, hospital etc were not in a big number during our grandparent's day. They used to be situated in different towns far from the resident. Grandparents did not have those facilities available and they need to survive the tremendious struggle.
Now-a-days, everything is in our close fist. We get every possible facilities to lead a hazard free life. Though life was much simpler then now but it was no easier and comfortable from now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...refore, I do agree that present life is more easier and comfortable than our grandparents u...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
... available then. My grandmother used to say me, they had to survive the hot sunny w...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...el from one place to another in a short period of time. Besides, we can see and talk at the sa...
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Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...free life. Though life was much simpler then now but it was no easier and comfortabl...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...fe was much simpler then now but it was no easier and comfortable from now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7994100295 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80916422801 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536873156342 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9982549945 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7391304348 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152151322974 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442629653362 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600506106545 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929958448903 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577388888226 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.