I agree with the statement that life today is a lot more easier and comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. The industrial revolution and the internet technology have taken human development to the next level to enhance our way of living.
During the days when my grandparents were children, they had only limited means of transportation to a designated place. It was mostly by public transportation like bus and less likely by trains and their personal vehicles like bicycle etc. On the other hand, we have come a long way from there and these days, we are able to travel by air to major cities of the world. Trains became ubiquitous mode of transportation. In metropolitan cities, we also have the underground subway and metro trains for local transportation.
During those days, information was accessible to common people mostly by personal books, magazines, journals or library. With the advent of internet, we are able to gain access to a number of resources for the information. We have the wikipedia, an online encyclopedia that can be used to know about any person, place or thing. We have e-papers that give us hourly updates of the news around us. We have several websites that provide journal and conference papers for research. Moreover, we have the social networking websites like facebook, whatsapp, quora, twitter etc. that lets us not only communicate with our friends and family, but also share any information that we want to.
Apart from transportation, communication has seen a major boost during the last century. In the olden days, they had postal service or telegrams to communicate with one another. It would take some days for the message to reach to the other person. So, it was not reliable during emergencies. In contrast, consider our present world where we have the fastest mode of communication possible. We have the telephones that lets us talk to any person at the very instant. We have the emailing service where most of the professional communication takes place. Internet also provides us wide variety of options to communicate with an another individual like via social networking websites like facebook, gmail, yahoo etc and apps like whatsapp, hike etc.
Unlike the olden days when literacy rate was low and getting educated was a big deal, there are ample resources and opportunities in the modern world to not only get educated via formal institutions, but also obtain degrees based on online courses. Popular websites like MIT open source, Coursera etc are few such examples. So, gaining skills is much more easier to pursue what ever we want to be it professional or at personal level of interest.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the statement that life today is way easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. Not only in the aforementioned sectors, we have come a long way in health, urban development and planning, infrastructure, administration, arts, facilities for sports etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... the statement that life today is a lot more easier and comfortable than it was when our gr...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding news'?
Suggestion: the surrounding news
...e-papers that give us hourly updates of the news around us. We have several websites that provide ...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s hourly updates of the news around us. We have several websites that provide jour...
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Line 7, column 624, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an individual' or 'another individual'.
Suggestion: an individual; another individual
... variety of options to communicate with an another individual like via social networking websites lik...
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Line 7, column 747, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oo etc and apps like whatsapp, hike etc. Unlike the olden days when literacy rate...
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Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ch examples. So, gaining skills is much more easier to pursue what ever we want to be it pr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'apart from', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263537906137 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.124548736462 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108303249097 0.0866891130778 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0451263537906 0.046263068375 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0649819494585 0.0685040099705 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110108303249 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0198555956679 0.0351676179071 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95079215658 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324909747292 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0776173285199 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00361010830325 0.0209618222197 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0198555956679 0.0139019557991 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3002.0 2387.08602151 126% => OK
No of words: 494.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07692307692 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34008097166 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246963562753 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19028340081 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135627530364 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95079215658 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508097165992 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 59.8671572315 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2962962963 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1409149874 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.185185185 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2962962963 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 42.9926525716 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.67692307692 1.45489161554 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264595694815 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0740547740775 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.055207952133 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467937265578 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134132528304 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959507524957 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110639651875 0.0781384742642 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.3144237322 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102464458584 0.067059652881 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202675463925 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947363331657 0.0618886996521 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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