In my opinion, I agree with the following statement that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Firstly, in some countries, they develop and create an electronic device such as a mobile phone, laptop, MP3 which is popular in most of the countries. In many public schools, local school, children rarely use a textbook to study because the details are too general or difficult to understand for children. Instead of making children become interested in learning, they use technology and find some resources that related to the lesson to help children understand. Children in the past they don't have a unique technology than children in the present. In the past, because of the poor conditions so they use a textbook and prepare lesson plans to teach students. Technology is not a good tool for students to study because the details are meager and sometimes both teachers and students don't understand the concept clearly.
Secondly, even children in the past don't use technology, then my opinion, I agree with the statement that nowadays technology has made children less creative than they were in ty can study by themselves along with independence and creative than the children in the present. Technology famous for the convenience and entertainment and that lead to the terrible effects. This modern automation is dangerous for children because if they use devices most of the time, it will neglect their study and children can be addicted. Also, it affects their health such as their eyes become fuzzy, their mind can be chaotic.
Thirdly, technology sometimes can be critical because most of the devices or machines is an electronic device and the carelessness of people can lead to the serious problem. For example, if we contact the power circuit with water, it will burn and if we touch it, the strong electricity will shock us with a high voltage.
Finally, the way to communicate with each other is crucial because we can share our idea about the lifestyle, job, hobby and it makes our relationship become stronger. Technology is a tool for people to relax or research but it's not a crucial tool for people nowadays because we can see many problems through this.
Thank so much e-grader for
Thank so much e-grader for giving me an useful feedback that i can improve my essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01081081081 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67264365473 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483783783784 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0237309742 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.6 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264305267815 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108667730256 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139202650632 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194676593843 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167693487065 0.0645574589148 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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