Thorough history computer and its application has been played the main role in mankind's life. One of the most important features of the computer is gaming. Some people believe that playing computer games is a waste of time and does not have any benefit, In contrast the others are against this idea. From my own perspective, I highly support the second ideology and in the next paragraphs will delve into the most significant reasons.
The most important reason is that by playing computer games children will be able to improve their character and personality. As long as a child is playing the game, he will see new situation in front of him and has to make decisions, then he probably will see the result of this decision in the future of the game. So by playing the game he can try and become ready in a virtual world for his real life.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that one of the most effective ways to learn the English language is by using computer games. During games, children are able to hear the voice of characters and also read the subtitles. An experiment has been done 3 years ago and the results showed that the children who were interacted with computer games, were more successful to learn a new language.
Although all aforementioned reasons are those which one may find out in a first glance. there is still one reason. Children can communicate with other children when they are playing online games and make a new friendship. Online games give kids this opportunity to talk to each other, think together and make decisions after speaking.
To make a long story short, if one merits the advantages and disadvantages of computer games, soon he will realize that this phenomenon should not banned from kids' life. But this fact should be considered that there are different levels of the game, so it is necessary to allow children to play the games which are appropriate for their ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...the game. So by playing the game he can try and become ready in a virtual world for his...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... successful to learn a new language. Although all aforementioned reasons are those wh...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ich one may find out in a first glance. there is still one reason. Children can commu...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'ban'
Suggestion: ban
...realize that this phenomenon should not banned from kids life. But this fact should be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, then, as to, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76261127596 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51542800925 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9387281484 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255869969659 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862604988646 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621568844264 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142376704611 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296499072238 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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