TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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What if the our earth hasnt any computer...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
What if the our earth hasnt any computer and whit-in th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
What if the our earth hasnt any computer and whit-in their games. P...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...hildrens and all peoples are absolutely play whit-in their fun. In my opinion, If th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd can change the incredible future. So i believe of my self thus I feel this way...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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Suggestion:
... will explore in the following essay. First of all, That earths all living tho...
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Suggestion: every day
...all, That earths all living thought are everyday spend
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, well, i feel, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 52.1666666667 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 465.0 1977.66487455 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 99.0 407.700716846 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.15434214553 4.48103885553 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29108188827 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 212.727598566 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.524837075471 133% => OK
syllable_count: 147.6 618.680645161 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1928453944 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102478329704 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490954472528 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395684494515 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554670845638 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554670845638 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 86.8835125448 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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