There is no doubt that the internet has become one of the most important things in our lives. It noticeably made the life much easier than before. while some people argue that the unprecedented access to the information through internet carries some disadvantages, I entirely believe that the benefits of the internet exceed any unwanted effects. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, all of us know that education is an essential part of any national development, nowadays, the internet plays an important role in the learning process. It gives the scientist an easy access to different informations that published in many reputable articles. Furthermore, there are many textbooks available on the internet, so, students can these books for free, in addition, they can purchase these books from online stores. For instance, during the last year, I had to a graduation research which I decided to conduct about a rare genetic disease called disease. At that time I was not able to find papers about the topic in the library. But when I looked on the internet, there were myriad researches conducted in different parts around the globe. Moreover, I communicate with many of the professors who made these researches who give me many invaluable advices which helped me to make a great research and all the credit goes back to the internet.
Secondly, the internet gave us unlimited access to some information that was prohibited in the previous decade. most of the governments, nowadays, hide some of the truth or change it in a considerable manner that distorts the reality, especially at the time of elections. Furthermore, most of the channels at the television and, newspapers, are actually governed by these politicians, Accordingly, they are not able to show the entire truth to the population. But fortunately, there are some honest people who work harder to discover the truth for the public. They use the internet to post their reports and express their views without any limitations. this participates in enlighting many of the leaders' manipulations and discovers many of their lies to the people.
In conclusion, the huge accessibility to the informations after the discovery of the internet enrich our lives in many aspects. regardless of the little ignorants disadvantages, we can safely say that it brings a lot of advantages to the humanity as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94760920069 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.165417556 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.736842105 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160600610827 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452064722092 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385598829558 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098939552125 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236959748446 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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