It is often said that, more and valuable information has a lot of positive effects on behavior and attitude. It does not an issue either if someone get information through internet or textbooks. As well as, people prefer to have more information regarding things rather than limited information.To pick up this point, I agree with the statements which says, nowadays social media provides a lot of interesting information to people. Because of two main reasons. First, access to more information raise knowledge's level to sky. Secondly, access to excess information will help us to guide people in correct ways.
Let us take look at, more information could add shines to people brain. However, great personality required sorts of knowledge and information regarding things, which will led them to success and they would be able to elevated their knowledge's level accurately. For instances, I wanted to do research about advertising. On contrary , information was not enough to complete the project, I decided to started searching about tremendous information which supposed to be include in research paper. After a while, I found the source of materials regarding advertisement.
Stated roughly, adds to our knowledge about place, study methods, foods, diseases would help us very better to guides people in marvelous ways. Furthermore, assume patients who they are suffered from hypertension in contrast He/She does not have enough information about what consciousness they needs to do until they can protect their self from heart attack. On contrary, pretend that enough information is available with a person who can warn the sufferers from what do is right for their health. Looking to this point, the man would feels proud about his help which he did to them.
Taking everything into consideration, get valuable and excess information about things in order to fly to high points. Moreover, such important information would increase the level of human being. In addition, great pleasure will cross the mind who guide the people by their enough knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... It does not an issue either if someone get information through internet or textboo...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... things rather than limited information.To pick up this point, I agree with the st...
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Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cial media provides a lot of interesting information to people. Because of two ma...
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Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of interesting information to people. Because of two main reasons. First, access to ...
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Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple. Because of two main reasons. First, access to more information raise knowled...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... research about advertising. On contrary , information was not enough to complete ...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'guide'.
Suggestion: guide
..., diseases would help us very better to guides people in marvelous ways. Furthermore, ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e does not have enough information about what consciousness they needs to do unti...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...ormation about what consciousness they needs to do until they can protect their self...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...h. Looking to this point, the man would feels proud about his help which he did to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28353658537 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85706201787 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4723520248 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2777777778 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174521852201 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054041597526 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418036627765 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109065458458 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579305860752 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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