The reading talks about chevalier's memoir. He wrote a long memoir which recounting his life. however, some critics casts doubts on claim made by Chevalier in his memoir. They mentioned that chevalier's life was more critical than it really was. The speaker, on the other hand challenged all points mentioned in the article.
First of all, the reading states Chevalier wrote in his memoir he was wealthy. Moreover, critics claims that he was not wealthy because he borrowed money. However, the professor refuse this. She mentioned that Chevalier arranged many properties. She argues Chevalier sells out his all properties and he waited for his money.
Second, the reading mentions that Chevalier recorded the conversation precisely which occurred between him and Voltaire. Critics also complains that it is impossible to remained the exact phrases which accustomed between them because the memoir was written after few years. on contrary, the lecturer claims that Chevalier's journal pinpoint the accuracy of conversion which wrote on the same year. Furthermore, he was able to remember the talks which happened between them.
Finally, the article suggests that Chevalier escaped from jail by used a piece of metal makes hole on ceiling than claiming on roof. Critics again appealing that Chevalier was in contact with many people and has a lot friends through them he got freedom. however, the incinerator says that he was a powerful man. She puts forth that after he escaped the ceiling and floor repaired again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... long memoir which recounting his life. however, some critics casts doubts on claim mad...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chevaliers'' or 'chevalier's'?
Suggestion: chevaliers'; chevalier's
...lier in his memoir. They mentioned that chevaliers life was more critical than it really w...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lier recorded the conversation precisely which occurred between him and Voltaire....
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...the memoir was written after few years. on contrary, the lecturer claims that Chev...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ot friends through them he got freedom. however, the incinerator says that he was a pow...
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Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the ceiling and floor repaired again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23456790123 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51930513012 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1988420925 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.560571151835 0.272083759551 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184678612636 0.0996497079465 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969152372623 0.0662205650399 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358503343116 0.162205337803 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882375835129 0.0443174109184 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.