Human learn new things every day, from his childhood to adulthood he got lot of informations either from school or street and community, I think that human need to have wide knowledge in different subjects than specialize in one for his academic career. I feel this way for two mean reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, during his life human faces different situations that needs some basic knowledge, and I give my husband as an example, he can fixes our house’s small issues such as plumbing, electricity issues, take care of our garden and even fixing my phone, and that due to his general knowledge.
In academic field it is obvious that student need to have a general acquaintance before hitting a specific subject, and as a compelling example when I were a student in nursing school we spent all the first year studing general topic as mathematics, sociology, psychology.
Those matters helped me a lot in my professional life as a nurse and helped me to inderstand better the patient and give him an excellent care.
In conclusion, basic knowledge is very important because it’s the base of any spesefic academic subject and it helps the better handle the subject
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'fix'
Suggestion: fix
...I give my husband as an example, he can fixes our house's small issues such as p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94146341463 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76050155372 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643902439024 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0035160962 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.833333333 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1666666667 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162859258227 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794543893547 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594907885364 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868812601323 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657026016658 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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