The family is the strong bonds between groups of the people in the society that we exist. In my opinion, the extended family has always significant rule, I could not imagine my life without them. I will explain my opinion in the following essay.
Firstly, having the supportive family is the best thing that each individul blessed to have. As far as I am concerned, I would love to spend most of the time with my grandparents and uncles, We had helped each other through the most traumatic and stressful situation. When I got a surgery in my broken knee, I had stayed home for one month. So, they came to visit me each day and cooked my favorite foods, and brought some delicious chocolate cookies. Therefore, the pains which I suffer from my surgery had not made me feel depress because I lived to surround a caring family.
Second, the holiday is the most enjoyable time of the year that family members can celebrate together. Since I was a teenager, we were living in the small city far from my grandparents. During the Christmas holidays, we moved to the Arsdgv, the city where my grandparents had lived. Also, we cooked tasty ginger cookies and some turkey and they invite my uncles to their house, I had a wonderful holiday. Now, we are living in the same city as they lived so every weekend evening, I had tried to invite them and prepared a flavorful Italian pasta. While We were sitting in dinig room, we spoke about our week and get a valuable a piece of advice. That's why it makes me to experience a peaceful enviroment.
In conclusion, we should expand many times with our beloved one who can rely on in every aspect of life. I believed that my extended families are the same as my parents. Thus, I completely disagree with the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'flavorful Italian pasta'.
Suggestion: flavorful Italian pasta
...I had tried to invite them and prepared a flavorful Italian pasta. While We were sitting in dinig room, w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...k and get a valuable a piece of advice. Thats why it makes me to experience a peacefu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58227848101 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5124270531 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5891839592 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0767519149576 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310451491913 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356624729691 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589160743035 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308532185493 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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