With the globalization of the world alongside the boost of local economy, traveling has become a knack and nowadays affordable to many people. But, there are some considerations which are taken into fact by every individual or family before planning their trips, which is to decide whether to travel in their own country or travel abroad. Well, most of the wealthier people often plan their trips to foreign countries but nowadays many middle class and upper middle class people are also trying to plan foreign trips and slowly it is turning to a status symbol. But, according to me, people are benefited more by travelling in own country.
First, traveling in own country is more economic and convenient. Also, while planning trips, people need not think about applying for visas, which according to me adds an extra cost to the trip. Also, after so much of planning there always remains an uncertainty for visa acceptance or rejection. Even if the visa issue gets resolved, there is an extra issue for currency exchange. Nevertheless, these might seem petty issues for many of them, still if we think of the aged people, they might still feel reluctant while undergoing so many processes.
Second, in my opinion, before exploring some other foreign countries, it is better to know about own country and explore more about it. Again, one might say that by visiting foreign countries, one can get exposure to other cultures, foreign languages, art and history and also gets the experience to see the natural scenic beauty of those places. Yes, it might be true. But, one can experience the same in their own country. For example, I am an Indian by birth and I am proud to say that my country is a land of diversity. One cannot deny the fact that a country like India is rich in so many fields like cultures, languages, religion, art, history and the whole life of a person might fall short if he/she starts exploring all the places. The scenic beauty of Kashmir, Himachal Pradesh and Arunachal Pradesh are no less than Switzerland. The backwaters of Kerala are no less than Venice and Italy. The Thar desert might not be as big as the Sahara desert in Africa, but still many people are awestruck by its beauty. There are so many beaches and coast line along the south east and South west of India. India is also reach in art and culture - the Ajanta and Ellora caves, Nalanda and Taxila university, archaeological remains of Mohenjo Daro and Harappa are the proofs of that. And, there are many more to add to the list.
Due to the aforesaid reasons, I firmly believe that it is a wise decision for people to travel in their own countries, instead of traveling abroad.
- TPO-14 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 903, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rala are no less than Venice and Italy. The Thar desert might not be as big as the ...
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Line 5, column 1123, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reached'.
Suggestion: reached
... and South west of India. India is also reach in art and culture - the Ajanta and Ell...
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Line 5, column 1330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...there are many more to add to the list. Due to the aforesaid reasons, I firmly b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75483870968 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46441359701 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3365625492 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1363636364 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184193654635 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058750583465 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670834290498 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135431746601 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685653157144 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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