There are certain considerations or factors that everyone can take into account to investigate and examine to have an elegant traveling. I certainly agree that companion of a tour guide is the best way to travel and have a pleasure and joyful trip. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, it is more likely to save your time. The main difficulty of a trip is how to schedule and prevent from any time wasting. Sometimes, for example, it would be a thorny problem to find the correct direction and get into a destination. The tour leaders get a huge experience and information about different cultures and locations during several years. They exactly know how to create a timetable and arrange a satisfactory travel for adults and children without any time loss.
Furthermore, avoiding from psychology problems is another noticeable reason. When somebody travels in a group not lead by a tour guide, they have to divide duties between group's members. Someone should be responsible for transportation and other one should prepare equipments. Because of these tasks people should feel stressed and pressured. But tour organizers are responsible for all of those mentioned tasks and works when persons travel in a tour. This free task journey would be a great opportunity for individuals to unwind and keep away the tension.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that tour agencies waste your money. These days, most of the tour leaders demand a lot of money for a short trip. Besides, they do not offer an expected facilities and services such as a free dinner or breakfast. However, still I affirm that tour guides are the best choice. Even though there are some defects or flaws, it can be neglected compared to the benefits that tour agencies have. In additional, some governments try to pass rules and force tour guides to reduce the cost and provide a high quality service.
Due to aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that travelling in a group directed by a tour guide is more ideal. Participation of time and healthiness are two prime and conspicuous supports.
- TPO-25 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 69
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- TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 88
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 364 350
No. of Characters: 1766 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.368 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.852 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.763 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.826 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.993 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.261 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.254 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'satisfactory travel'.
Suggestion: satisfactory travel
...w how to create a timetable and arrange a satisfactory travel for adults and children without any tim...
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Line 7, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost and provide a high quality service. Due to aforementioned ground, all folk s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260651629073 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0802005012531 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0325814536341 0.046263068375 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0250626566416 0.0685040099705 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102756892231 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0175438596491 0.0351676179071 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.8395272682 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325814536341 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00250626566416 0.00188951952338 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.110275689223 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225563909774 0.0209618222197 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125313283208 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2180.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98901098901 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348901098901 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263736263736 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184065934066 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115384615385 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8395272682 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590659340659 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 68.9566549293 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8260869565 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.18479782 48.84282405 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7826086957 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8260869565 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 42.1997133301 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.76744186047 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339292116197 0.300154397459 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0653072281689 0.103427244359 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0583680163497 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450554461267 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121235349041 0.151897553556 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108648458824 0.114077575197 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625412225383 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260304073691 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0411676591998 0.067059652881 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213803228204 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321330042477 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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