There are certain considerations or factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine the best plan for a proper relationship. I certainly agree that telling the truth is the most significant consideration. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The descriptions go as follows.
Firstly, telling the truth can strengthen a relationship. These days, the world alters swiftly and humankind experiences a huge enhancement and achievement in several fields of science and engineering including transportation, communication, and health caring. These practical and theoretical progresses not only assist people to be more comfortable but also create a big gap between persons. Sometimes, it would be very difficult for people to make a new friend and also continue their friendship for several years. In fact, telling the truth is a crucial factor that can fill mentioned gap by causing a mutual trust between people and bring friends closer together.
Furthermore, avoiding from any money loss is another noticeable reason. Nowadays, all adults work hard enough to make money for foods, clothes, or even spend to have an amusing and exciting time. They ought to be aware and compete with others to reach to an extreme interest rate. In this circumstance, any lie in a business relationship between individuals can make bankrupt and destroy a well known business or perhaps, in a worst scenario, cause a catastrophic event. For instance, any lie by a civil engineer about robustness of a building or structure can be unreasonable and likely noncompensable.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that sometimes it is more beneficial to tell lie. Chiefly, doctors can lie in order to promote patients’ self confidence, and therefore boost recovery process. However, still I affirm that telling the truth has more benefits. Although telling lie has some short term advantages, in a long time, any lie can be the source of future troubles. Plus, patients will understand about doctors' lie sooner or later, and this can deteriorate their physical and mental health.
Due to the aforementioned ground, all people should bear in mind that telling the truth in any relationship is more ideal. Participation of trust and money are two prime and conspicuous supports.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In this circumstance, any lie in a business relationship between individuals can make bankrupt and destroy a well known business or perhaps, in a worst scenario, cause a catastrophic event.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and worst
patients will understand about doctors' lie sooner or later, and this can deteriorate their physical and mental health.
Description: 'their' refers to what? 'patients' or 'doctors'. Be sensitive to use pronouns.
Sentence: For instance, any lie by a civil engineer about robustness of a building or structure can be unreasonable and likely noncompensable.
Error: noncompensable Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 370 350
No. of Characters: 1902 1500
No. of Different Words: 225 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.386 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.141 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.976 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.619 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.535 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople and bring friends closer together. Furthermore, avoiding from any money los...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...oy a well known business or perhaps, in a worst scenario, cause a catastrophic ev...
^
Line 5, column 605, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unreasonable and likely noncompensable. Admittedly, there are some justification...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32432432432 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1174665221 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610810810811 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2346860706 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8095238095 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128995225075 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430221833512 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485708181553 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759529052663 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017853969325 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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