The best way to travel is by controversial. Some people think that the best to travel is with the help of tour guide. Others prefer to travel alone without any guide in a group of people. I personally agree with the people who believes in tour guide. He is more knowledgeable than normal people about the particular location and the details that we do not consider as important things.
To begin with,the tourist guy will be more knowledgeable about the particular location and its detail that most of the normal people do not know.My own experience I went to Tajmahal and different places around it but local people knew much better than other people, Knew the places that we can take photo, they knew about different scenes and different poses.
Moreover, I believe that every detail around Tajmahal was interesting and have something to say. When we met tourist guide he introduced us to a family who live there. They invited us to their place. Their place and food was so delicious that we can not forget even know after few years, was so tasty with delicious sauce and spicy food that we could not find anywhere else in the world.
Furthermore, a lot of knowledge about different accent and different colors in India was taught to us with our tourist guide. We have lot of fun in their color festival that they put different colors on each others face. We were a group and we celebrate with Indians.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that traveling with a tour guide especially to foreign country is best experience. I enjoyed that trip to India because we were traveling as a group and we had someone who introduce everything in detail for us, we could happily live with an Indian family and have tasty food with them.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: We have lot of fun in their color festival that they put different colors on each others face.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and others
flaws:
You can't always use examples from the same location.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 307 350
No. of Characters: 1393 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.537 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.416 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.412 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.604 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.263 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...er as important things. To begin with,the tourist guy will be more knowledgeable ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...t most of the normal people do not know.My own experience I went to Tajmahal and d...
^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... interesting and have something to say. When we met tourist guide he introduced us t...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215805471125 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.161094224924 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911854103343 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0577507598784 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.09726443769 0.0685040099705 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0182370820669 0.0351676179071 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4891616714 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334346504559 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0668693009119 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151975683891 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121580547112 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1734.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 305.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68524590164 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32131147541 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193442622951 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134426229508 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0983606557377 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4891616714 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504918032787 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.6903677706 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3333333333 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.341420363 48.84282405 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 39.6775956284 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.19230769231 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298987741335 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166169874019 0.103427244359 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113068065696 0.0752933317313 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572160588178 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182753750828 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145358625449 0.114077575197 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948577645425 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288613370194 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.050901223504 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191505802616 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102695815048 0.0618886996521 166% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.