Nowadays traveling is more and more popular than ever before. People have many different purposes and reasons to travel. However, which is the best way for travelers? Some people like to tour with a group led by a tour guide. Others love to travel alone. People are able to enjoy traveling according to their own will. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement above. I would like to tour with my friends and led by a knowledgeable tour guide. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, traveling with my friends and a learned guide enables me to learn many new things. We acknowledge that, we usually travel to strange places where we are not familiar with. If we travel alone, we will feel lonely and it seems to me that I will be isolated among strangers, especially in areas that people speak a different languages from me. Meanwhile, if we travel with our friends and led by an excellent tour guide, of course the tour guide has to know about those places already. Therefore, she or he will tell us about the cultures of that places. We can enjoy their local food and even making new friends there. My own experience is a compelling example of this case. Last year, I went to the Holy land with my friends and a wonderful man tour guide. He explained for us many questions, such as how people in the Holy land could live and cultivate crops in extremely hot weather, and how monks could live their religious lives in carves. It was an awesome trip to me.
Another benefit of traveling with a group led by a tour guide is that we will have more fun and our trip will safer. We can talk together along the way to our destinations, we can take pictures together in impressed and beautiful places. We are able to share with others our feeling. Meanwhile, if we travel alone, we have no friend to talk with, if we see lovely views, nobody takes pictures for us. Moreover, when we travel with others, we can be safer. In fact, there are always some things happen suddenly, such as someone may get lost and get sick. In this situation we need help from others. However, if we go alone, we have to handle by ourselves and it is not an easy task.
In conclusion, people have different ideas about traveling. I strongly believe that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide because we can have fun together and our trip will be safer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e popular than ever before. People have many different purposes and reasons to travel. However...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'language'?
Suggestion: language
... in areas that people speak a different languages from me. Meanwhile, if we travel with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41797752809 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36851587307 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462921348315 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.232621288 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7931034483 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3448275862 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93103448276 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185241657708 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633004070806 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621100409553 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143301420674 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768476274972 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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