Travelling is one of many things that people enjoy participating. People of any age, any occupation can travel. It is one of ways of escaping the mundane reality, forgetting the routine life, to make new experiences for life.
In my view I think it is better to travel without a tour guide. I feel this way for two reasons which I will elaborate on in the following paragraphs.
First of all, planning and executing a travel trip without a tour guide is fun. In the presence of a tour guide, everyone in the group has to follow this person compulsively. Moreover, some tour guides might take care of many other groups. Some people who travel with their group might not feel comfortable to move along with others. Sometimes, the tour head could be harsh in order to calm the other group members. Similarly, if anyone wants to spend some time perambulating a place, this might not be possible because the trip is conducted based on a fixed schedule. Without a trip guide, people could wander here and there for a little bit, savoring the ambience of the place.
Although there is will remove the burden of planning ahead but one could not relish the tour in the very way he wishes. My personal experience is a personal example of this. Last year I had visited the Ellora caves in India, though the caves stretch for 10 kilometers long. Most of groups visiting that place might have a tour guide. However, the trip might be exhausting without a guide. But with a guide it is more taxing as he makes every group to follow his schedule.
Secondly, going on a trip in a semi planned way is more exciting and endearing. For instance, planning only for accommodation and places to visit is sufficient. Consequently, time spent at any particular place should be unplanned and dynamic. Because, no one can predict the mood at any place. Depending on the mood, one might wish to stay longer or leave right away. This type of impromptu might be risky and deadly dangerous, nonetheless, it will be adventurous if proper safety measures had taken. But following a tour guide is optimal, in case one want to visit as many places as possible. In spite of this, you might lose some embracing moments in the trip. On the other hand, planning your own trip might cost you less.
In conclusion, one should not depend on a tour guide for many other reasons as well. Even travelling in a group might reduce the burden of the onerous task. For the trip to be both memorable and cheerful, is it better to make the preparations on own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 633, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...eople could wander here and there for a little bit, savoring the ambience of the place. A...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... place should be unplanned and dynamic. Because, no one can predict the mood at any pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61692650334 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55508700455 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496659242762 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2510939043 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9666666667 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162895470893 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050558044745 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441770154839 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103281206383 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408031871246 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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