Wilderness, in other words, dense forests and wild life reserves should be preserved by the enforcing laws for various reasons.For one, these areas provide shelter for various animals, some of them wild , are killed by people surrounding these areas out of fear of these animals; and also for miscalleneous reasons. As a result , many species are on the verge of
extinction. The Bengal Tiger,a species of Tiger found in India , there number decreased exponentially over the last decades.
Indian Government took certain measures to curb the extinction. At present their decline is significantly slowing down.
Another important reason is such forests are home are various number of species and minerals , considering the amazon rain forest, the biggest in the world, contains more than 30 different butterfly species , more surprisinlgy , the more are yet to be confirmed, discovery of different species is a field of research in zoology which lays foundation for various other studies.Similarly, for a number of other reasons countries should not let the destuction of such areas and take measures by enforcing laws to protect and hence preserce these areas.
Although government should take certain measures drafting laws to preserve wild life , these are cases where the membes of the running government exploit them for personal benefit.In south India, the Chief Minister of the ruling party has written a will that constitues 70% of the Forest in that state to his family. Such incidents are a disgrace and reprehensible.Nonetheless, people should also get involved in making the lawss to preserve the wild life.
Therefore, nations should step up, if not already, in enforcing the laws for both preservation of forests , endangered species and other wild life to embrace the benefits that are inherent in such areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nonetheless, similarly, so, therefore, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33680555556 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04734786019 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.211237167 60.3974514979 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.777777778 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.21951772744 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943921910862 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372002283354 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288075470434 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477331067464 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281516540165 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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