TPO 17- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this century, the huge advancement and improvement in several fields of engineering and science facilitates our lives and changes our world completely. Thus, people should adjust themselves to these developments. When it comes to the different ways of advertising products, controversy surrounds the issue of whether they make products to look more attractive or not? I am of the opinion that most advertisements need to take advantage of the recent technology advancement and some innovative methods to sell their products as many as possible, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
One of the remarkable aspects of the ongoing discussion which needs a keen contemplation is that technology advancement brings about more opportunities for advertisement makers to imply them in their shows. In essence, they may apply some the audio-visual depictions to make the product more appealing. Take the recent advertisement of a given fast food in our country. They created a beautiful, catchy song and a comic figure to absorb more young people to their hamburgers. In fact, this method of advertisement creatively grasped our youngsters to buy them.
Another noticeable aspect of the topic which demands to be reflected is that most of the advertisements use some deceiving methods to get the attention of the people to their products. As a matter of fact, they highlight merits of the right and try to justify their customers that deficiencies of this product are negligible to be considered. It vividly can help the factories and companies to overcome their rivals and obtain more customers and make more profits. Perhaps, the experience of my father's company can shed more light on the matter. They were losing their capital just because of not having a proper advertisement in comparison to their competitors. In this regard, they let a professional person improve their reputation by changing people's attitude about their products. Thanks to this method, today, we run a huge company and use our ads on TV successfully.
Paradoxically, there are some justifications that advertisement makers should bear this fact on to their mind that trust is their most valuable possession and they have to respect their consumer’s perseverance. As my grandfather always says that if you want to be a great businessman, you should gain your customer's trust. Therefore, In most of the cases, business holders ought to remind their customer's that they are important for them and they will never scratch this mutual relationship.
Taken all the aspects mentioned above into consideration, I am pretty convinced that there are many reasons to foster the idea of most advertisements make products seem fascinating than they are because they have more facilities today to implement on their depictions, and also they exert some intriguing methods to absorb more people to their product. Meanwhile, there are some negative points like damaging their reputation in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30607966457 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11459145207 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526205450734 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9913070866 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.523809524 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144141237444 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466001307157 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042667607725 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989757396307 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292026285312 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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