TPO 17- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: STPO
sTPO 17- Do you agree or disagree with the f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and examples to support your answer. Nowadays, one product has over hundreds ...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s more attractive than real product. advertisement is developing as technolog...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advertisement
...e attractive than real product. advertisement is developing as technology is invented...
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Line 14, column 177, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...to the latest version. Furthermore, the more better outcome they make the more support and ...
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Line 14, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Companies
...on is gained through one genius result. companies are purchasing those technique or pay t...
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Line 14, column 324, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technique' or 'those techniques'?
Suggestion: this technique; those techniques
...genius result. companies are purchasing those technique or pay the suitable fee for the patent,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, really, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 407.700716846 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44252873563 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76477402803 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718390804598 0.524837075471 137% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3853652618 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468208542782 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15159050368 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155474772902 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300776885594 0.150856017488 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136424235347 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.