What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As parent animal first teach the hunting skill to their baby, people need to learn how to earn money for the first priority in this capital society. For their further happiness and responsibility as a one of the social member, the skill which help people to get money is important.
Depend on the skill that make a person earn money a lot or not, it decides whether a person can be satisfied in this capitalism society. it is even more crucial for own's future. To buy certain products that really want to purchase, buyers have to pay. Foods that makes people full or even cloth that protect people from cold and assist people to express their own style require right interchange. Without ability that assist person to earn money, not only it is impossible to shield themselves from the external treat but it also unable to satisfy their needs. other skills like good at dancing and studying cannot resolve the primary problems of human's fundamental needs. These skills are only skills that polish person's secondary needs.
skill for earning money is not a choice. it is duty that everyone have to follow. As it mentioned before, the skills that know how to earn money is the best solution that can satisfy each person's primary needs because all raw materials are limited and someone has to spend their time for it. however, if someone refuses to work or earn money for their family and society, then that society will soon collapse. For instance, close friend of mine, James, had inherited quiet lots of legacies from their old parents. however, he does not know how to manage that money and invest it for his further prosper. he soon wasted most of his asset in a decade. His rest of their family members were betrayed him because he had acquired any skills that can maintain their family. it eventually causes the failure. skills to learn how to earn money are related to others.
As a result, the only skill that can provide best benefit to person is learning how to make money. Through this skill, it can merely satisfy all the human's basic needs but it also possible to enrich everyone's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, then, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75338753388 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21146514005 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6189260176 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5238095238 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142723304352 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533929059777 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585544438386 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106147955766 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211660434991 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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