Quality of same product differ from country to country , for instance Ponds company produce different level of same product for different customer with different price.
Companies produce low quality product for poor countries , therefore its not problem of advertisement, because same advertisement is for all level of products.
As far as my view is concerned I strongly agreed with the mentioned ,because I have personal experience and following to reasons:
To begin, most companies advertise product much better in there website than they really are, once I have orderd seat of dark blue dress , but when I received dress the color was light blow and also quality was low, therefor I have returned the product.
Furthermore some companies doesn't show real price of product and services on their website ,For instance my brother booked a room total price was 200 USD per night , but after the hotel charged him 50 USD more for electricity bill as well.
To sum up, keeping in view forementioned reason I believe that advertisement make product seem much better they really are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 52.1666666667 35% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 407.700716846 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15254237288 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68467359271 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4087790307 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.4 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 20.6045352989 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.45110844103 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180018892338 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114750673988 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108521354671 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105589967152 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981366176547 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 11.7677419355 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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