TPO 19
Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
People need check various news sources in order to be well-informed.
It is true that people must check many news resources in order to be well informed. By doing this, readers can avoid any false information and compare the stated events and facts with each other. Moreover, people can get more information skipped by some source by reading another one and memorize it spontaneously.
Nowadays, people mostly read information from informal sources such as Facebook and twitter which is likely to contain unconfirmed information written by any writer. If people do not check other sources, they will believe the false information misleadingly. By reading about the fact or event from another formal source such as news agent, people can distinguish whether the information is true or not. For example, in Facebook, people just share false information which was intended to just amuse, without checking if it is true, then it causes more people to believe it. Fortunately, people can avoid this false information by checking formal news agents.
Secondly, some news resources tend to skip facts or events which they thought not fascinating or significant. However, the eliminated information might be crucial to some readers. But the individuals can find these information by checking other sources since another news resources shares those information. For instance, my professor of Mongolia history requires his students to read at least three books about historical event in order compare them and get all necessary information, which helps us to be know well about the event.
Thirdly,we may read some information again and again while checking different sources. The more we read, the more memorable it will be. We will read some information so much that we memorize it without intending. Since remembering significant information for a long time is one important aspect of being having knowledge, it is crucial advantage of reading many news resources.
For those three reason,I prefer to check various sources of information in order to be well informed.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-02-14 | DaVa20011218 | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...e readers. But the individuals can find these information by checking other sources since another...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...ces since another news resources shares those information. For instance, my professor of Mongolia...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...e know well about the event. Thirdly,we may read some information again and aga...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... news resources. For those three reason,I prefer to check various sources of info...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31861198738 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80390005643 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8404625793 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1764705882 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297498372899 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117459766331 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710063179299 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203822971007 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728593705814 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.