TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The world had become a small village due to the internet and different outlets of information. I agree with the statement that in order to be well informed, a person must get information from many different resources. I will explore the reasons for my stance in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, in this free world in which anybody can share or publish information on the internet, the credibility and the accuracy of information became extremely vital. Some people publish false news or data because they have some hidden agenda.Others may spread rumors about someone or party due to political motives. In this atmosphere where it is increasingly difficult to know the real agenda of any publisher, you need to get your information from more than one source to compare and examine the reliability of such information. For instance, while I was following the news about the war in Syria, I found many contradictory information about the some news. It goes without saying that the political motivations are the culprit in this issue, because those who publish such misleading information are trying to make you an advocate for their cause by hook or by crook. Having said that, I assure the importance of following many different sources of news.

Furthermore, some news outlets possess the notion that the quantity is more important than the quality, so they keep posting or airing about some occurrence here and there without deeply investigating the validity and reliability of the news which are delivered. The only thing they care about is how to raise the number of the viewers or the followers and keep them always attracted to their channel or page on the internet. For instance, I have many times read news about some evens that happened in the Egyptian society which to appeared to be false after some days. All these negative and misleading news are just aiming to attract the greatest numbers of followers and readers.

Admittedly, someone may argue that it is better to depend on one source or media that you trust to avoid being deceived with false information. However, I believe that a person should always keep abreast with all kind of media to get a bigger image about the world. You should build a solid experience that helps to distinguish between the real authentic media and the false misleading outlets

In conclusion,I definitely support the idea of getting information form more than one resource. It you give you the chance to avoid being deceived by the unreliable or careless media.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Others
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much contradictory information', 'a good deal of contradictory information'.
Suggestion: much contradictory information; a good deal of contradictory information
...he news about the war in Syria, I found many contradictory information about the some news. It goes without sa...
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Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99054373522 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71613613489 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508274231678 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.354011274 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.176470588 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8823529412 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257882774997 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937535105501 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119426086727 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162547116803 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109672793996 0.0645574589148 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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