How to win in the world's competition? many people are wondering about becoming successful during their lifetime. In this regard, some people think taking risk leads to tremendous achievements. There are others opinion that it is better to do what you know how to do well. I am personally inclined to believe that the former approach pales in comparison to the latter. I cling to my viewpoint for two reasons and will shed light on them in the following.
To begin with, in my opinion, taking risks means a waste of money, time and energy. To be more specific, when you decide to take a risk that means you are not aware of your decision's consequences. Your action may be instructive in a certain way, but it also could be destructive in many other ways. For example, consider parents who take the risk of moving to a different city because they may have better job opportunities there. They may get the jobs, but they are not aware of how their decision influences their kid's life. He may lose his friends and have a difficult life in the new place. Worse than that, they may fail to get new jobs. That makes a calamity for both parents and their kid. That is because they did not pay attention to their decision's consequences. On the other hand, a person who is always aware of her decision's consequences tries to observe the situation carefully. If the position is something that she is sure she can be good at it, she will take it.
The other point to be mentioned is, people who take risks, believe in luck. They let the faith to do their responsibilities. On the other hand, a rational person who thinks it is better to do the work you are good at it, do not believe in luck, she considers herself responsible for her actions, so she tries a lot to do her best and if she fails, she blames herself, and that is why she gets good results. Hard work people keep trying, while risk takers stay back and let the faith decides for them. For example, a risk taker person goes to an interview that he knows he is not qualified for. If he gets the job, he thinks it is a good luck and if he loses the job, he thinks it is a bad luck. While a hardworking person seeks the positions which she is good at them.
All in all, considering the foregoing points and examples, I recommend that doing a job that you know how to do well is a safer path that leads to a certain win, However, taking risks are more likely to fail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
How to win in the worlds competition? many people are wondering ...
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Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
How to win in the worlds competition? many people are wondering about becoming suc...
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Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es the job, he thinks it is a bad luck. While a hardworking person seeks the position...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, you know, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35398230088 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48841784141 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477876106195 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0456751378 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.72 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.08 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229904226047 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664408180807 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748392185183 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168273553376 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511948263787 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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