tpo 21- independent writing

Grammar and spelling errors:
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i think, personaaly, suding hard is one o...
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i think, personaaly, suding hard is one o...
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Suggestion: As
...t important factors in being succesful. as we try harder, we can obtain more infor...
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Suggestion: Based
...n about the field that we work on that. based on that, we can get best grade in our e...
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...at, we can get best grade in our exams. in my opinion, because of following reason...
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Suggestion: First
...ing hard has a key role in our future. first of all, we prepare ourselves for geting...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...l, we prepare ourselves for geting jobs in future. So, for being good in our careers we n...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
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Suggestion: all the
...ng good in our careers we need to learn all of the related things during our academic peri...
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Suggestion: In
...ated things during our academic period. in real world we need real skills. so, i t...
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Suggestion: So
...iod. in real world we need real skills. so, i think the ability to relate with oth...
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... in real world we need real skills. so, i think the ability to relate with other ...
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Suggestion: For
...relate with other people is not enough. for example, i have a friend that he is a v...
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...a friend that he is a very lazy person. i remember, he never did his assignments ...
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...a friend that he is a very lazy person. i remember, he never did his assignments ...
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Suggestion: He
...his assignments when he was in college. he always copied her homeworks. he failed ...
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Suggestion: He
...ollege. he always copied her homeworks. he failed in most of the courses that he h...
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Suggestion: But
...led in most of the courses that he had. but he was very confident that he could fin...
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Suggestion: Finaly
...d carrier by using his fathers friends. finaly, he get the job, but hr fired because h...
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Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...y using his fathers friends. finaly, he get the job, but hr fired because he does n...
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Suggestion: Lacking
... fired because he does not have skills. lacking of experienses was one of the major fac...
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Line 2, column 692, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...es was one of the major factors that he loose his job. second, in my opinion, by ear...
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Suggestion: Second
...e major factors that he loose his job. second, in my opinion, by earning skills and b...
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Suggestion: Having
...g information we can develop ourselves. having related skills and information in our f...
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Suggestion: For
...r fields cause progressing in our jobs. for instance, one of my friends was in her ...
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Suggestion: She
... one of my friends was in her own feet. she do her bests in university and she earn...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... of my friends was in her own feet. she do her bests in university and she earned ...
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Suggestion: Fonally
...she earned the best scors in her exams. fonally, she applied for many jobs in many comp...
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Suggestion: After
...pplied for many jobs in many companies. after awhile she invited from most of the co...
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Message: Did you mean 'a while'?
Suggestion: a while
... for many jobs in many companies. after awhile she invited from most of the companies...
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...any jobs in many companies. after awhile she invited from most of the companies f...
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Suggestion: She
...om most of the companies for interview. she got the best job with highest salary. a...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...ies for interview. she got the best job with highest salary. and it is notthe all of story. ...
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Suggestion: And
...e got the best job with highest salary. and it is notthe all of story. after a year...
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... salary. and it is notthe all of story. after a year, she gradually got promotion in ...
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Suggestion: Now
... gradually got promotion in her career. now she is one of the managers of a great f...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...agers of a great factory in my country. therefore, i think we have to use in our opportun...
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Suggestion: I
...great factory in my country. therefore, i think we have to use in our opportuniti...
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Suggestion: Dreams
...ties and studing hard make it possible. dreams come true and for these dreams we do no...
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...for these dreams we do not need anyone. i taught many things from my friend. she ...
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...for these dreams we do not need anyone. i taught many things from my friend. she ...
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...e. i taught many things from my friend. she always encourage me to do my bests. i t...
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Suggestion: encourages
... many things from my friend. she always encourage me to do my bests. i think for being a ...
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...she always encourage me to do my bests. i think for being a best person in our ca...
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...she always encourage me to do my bests. i think for being a best person in our ca...
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Suggestion: the
...ge me to do my bests. i think for being a best person in our career we dont need ...
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Suggestion: don't
...or being a best person in our career we dont need wierd processes, we just need foco...
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...sses, we just need focous on our study. by hard studing we can earn not only brill...
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...ty but also we can be a useful person. in a nutsheel, i think people must try har...
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...can be a useful person. in a nutsheel, i think people must try hard in their les...
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... people must try hard in their lessons. they have to gain many skills and also they ...
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Suggestion: A
... also they have to earned best degrees. a fruitful person can find his/her way an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31177829099 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37119362139 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480369515012 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2882873071 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.9117647059 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7352941176 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26470588235 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 5.5376344086 921% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 11.7677419355 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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