The success in any future job depends on many factors. I do agree with the statement that the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. I will explain the reasons for my stance in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, nearly all types of works require contact or dealing with people, whether face to face or in indirect ways. In all cases, you sell a service, or product, to your clients or customers, who are certainly people. You aim is to gain their trust in your service or product, and above all they should some trust and have some belief in your personality, honesty, and quality. All these factors do not need only good service or product, but also require establishing a loyalty form them towards you. Even if you have the best goods or services but the clients do not trust or like you, you are liable to failure than those of lower quality, but with likeness form people. It extremely vital to bridge this gap of psychological barriers to give yourself and your job the chance to flourish. For example, I used to buy my computer accessories form a certain shop known for its quality product, but unlikely I had bad experience with them when I wanted to exchange keyboard that I bought with another one. customers service give me very bad impression about them because they were not cooperative as I expected.
Furthermore, however you are good at your work, you will not get enhance and polish your skills without dealing with people. The real world and getting in touch with different clients and situations help you to gain the real abilities and skills which make your work is unique and appreciated. You can not expect someone who has no experience to be in the same level of knowledge and profession of someone else who has been working in his field for 10 years. Therefore, the daily communication with people and the problems you face in your real job is the foremost quality that will push you to climb the ladder of success faster than others. For instance, Bill Gates, did not finish his college in Harvard, however, he is now one of the most successful business men in the world.
Admittedly, some people may argue that without studying, you won't have the knowledge or the skill. That have some logic, but the university study gives you the basic lines. The real challenge is out there when you indulge in the world of reality.
In conclusion, I do agree that relating to people is more important for future job, than studying hard, That is due to the fact that the need communication skills and the experience depend mainly in coming in building relation with individuals in the real environment of work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in all cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69639065817 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50151751852 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4074422196 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.55 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200701398821 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711877043788 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120645015452 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190357091209 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177897864256 0.0645574589148 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.