TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an

Nowadays, technology and our environment are changing fast. And there is fierce competition between people. So, it is essential that we accomplish our works as quickly as possible. While some may think it’s worth to work fast and risk making mistakes, I definitely believed doing work slowly and make sure everything is doing correctly is better.
First, making mistakes is wasting of time. It is important to do everything correctly to earn our goals. People should notice all aspects of everything in their work, consult by experts and then plan for doing that work in details. Besides, by doing work quickly, it is more likely that works are done incorrectly and many mistakes are done. As a result, It should be done again and the time waste. For instance, my manager at work wanted to do everything quickly. We had an important project that should be done on time. But, my manager didn’t take time for planning. By making many mistakes, we miss time. We did not that the project on time and our customer did not satisfy.
Second, if we work slowly and notice all details, we can save our money. We can forecast some risks and threatened for our work and do something about preventing them. By doing so, we are able to get more profit. For instance, we wanted to produce a new product in our factory. Because, we did not plan the process of production accurately, a large amount of material converted to waste It was a great disadvantage for our factory.
Third, by doing mistakes, people do not trust us and lose our reliability. For instance, when I graduated and started working, my manager all the time asked me to do my work quickly. So, I did it and made a lot of mistakes. My manager did not trust me anymore and he checked all my works again. It was a shameful situation. As a result, I decided to do my work correctly and efficiently.
To sum up, doing works slowly and correctly is necessary. Doing work quickly and making a lot of mistakes, Cause wasting time and wasting money. Also, people think we are not reliable anymore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, third, while, for instance, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6694214876 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62192678618 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.318500101 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5357142857 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9642857143 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255129969908 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800367449557 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792948973088 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17372133075 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718591962027 0.0645574589148 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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