TPO 23- In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct
Over the past few decades, the issue of whether people should work quickly and having mistakes or working preciesly but slowly has receieved a great deal of attention from employees and sociologists. Akthough some may argue that by doing a work quickly people could have more time to get more projects, I as well as many others believe that every work needs to be done accurately and accuracy is vital for some work. I am of the opinion that both od these viewpoints have their own mertis and drawbacks, the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
Fisrt and foremost, an paramount reason why accuracy should be considered in every work is that the result of each work has its consequences on the world. This means that, in some ocassions, their consequences could be harmful like either medicine or engineering mistakes. It is statisticly said that the twenty percents of death in the medicine world are belonging to doctors who do not concentrate on their work which leading to some disasters like death. Similarity, in engineering world, doing some activities fast without attetntion to the plausible mistakes, subsequently cause dangerous happens, chernobyl accident as well.
A further reason for this view is that in this compitetory world, since it is vital to have a secure occupation people should do their work more correct no matter how time it might costs. doing job without any mistake, people could get more job position due to the fact that institutions are sensitive to any little mistake in each tasks. In addition, having accuracy in a work is a ethical affair which has being discussing throughout the history. It is ocassionally said that people who do their work with accuracy is more reliable due to the reason that they are more responsible about their duties.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementione reasons above, I can draw a conclusion that working slowly but correct is more important chiefly due to its consequenses and ethical matters.
- TPO 29-Edmontpsaurus migration 81
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 66
- TPO 22- Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom 73
- TPO 42-glass danger for birds 80
- The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, well, in addition, in brief, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07552870091 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80947600295 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.4506659296 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226722279155 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896692345019 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622589666796 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152344710672 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356331960792 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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