There is plethora of major societal issues that call for the involvement of young generation, New voices can become the stakeholder for the worldwide change. It is a controversial question whether youngsters involve to support community work or not. No-doubt, number of controversies are overwhelming this issue. In my opinion, young people assist the societies at all the levels. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, youths start working as volunteer at different organizations after passing high school. Numerous unions warmly welcome students to help them out at various tasks regarding patient care at hospital in the different wards, to teach elementary kids at their school and so many. On the basis of their services at different bodies, sometimes they are also short-listed for the part-time jobs. My own experience is a compelling example of this. After high school, I had started teaching math at elementary school in my area, this was the milestone work in my life spasm where I learned how to deal with little ones and how to work in a school body. This work made me so passionate about teaching, when I found all the kids got A grade in the final exam, later on in the university I chose math as my major, and after that I got job in a high school to teach math. In this way, my little donation in the school helped kids as well as rise my career.
Secondly, from last decades new young science academics are emerged from all over the world. They are doing the remarkable work in the advent of new technology and research area. For instance, plentiful diseases, which were not able to treat, now their efforts make it possible. Because of this reason, people enjoy more healthy life, and there is major decline in the mortal rate. Even though the participation of united states to encourage the young talent broaden the horizon of research which is an established example for all other countries. So, I believe this work which is done by new researchers, also helps the population at broaden scale.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people contribute their share to benefit the different communities and organizations by doing free jobs for the people from all walks of the life, their new innovations help the entire nation to provide facilities and good health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87810945274 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68907773795 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5836996228 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.210526316 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115125937619 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371738119811 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317275989848 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083983866499 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376154254632 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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