Even though nowadays jobs opportunity is so difficult, I think it is better for people to wait for a job that would be more satisfying, so I firmly disagree with the statement. I'm holding this thought for two main reasons, which are preventing job turn-over and preventing health issues.
First of all, taking jobs right away without considering satisfaction could lead to losing jobs easily. I think there is nothing worthier than having a comfortable place of work. I will spend the majority of my life in a job. If I'm not satisfied in any secured job, I cannot keep it. I have read an article from a website cited employee satisfaction is a major factor that could lead to a high rate of job turn-over in many companies if it was not met.
Secondly, uncomfortable jobs can affect people health negatively. Because people spend most of their time at their jobs, it is important for them to have this place as healthy as much as possible. Otherwise, people may get sick and eventually cost them to have some chronic diseases, such as high blood pressure, diabetes, and elevation of lipid in the blood. All of these diseases are more likely that a person to have them in uncomfortable place due to work over-stress.
Last but not least, people won't lose their job if they have a satisfiable one; hence, their work productivity would increase. Moreover, people will not think about other jobs if they are happy with their current jobs, which is a perfect matter for companies and other business.
All in all, I utterly believe that it is more beneficial for people to wait for satisfied jobs rather than taking the chance for immediate jobs. This is because satisfied jobs enhance personal performance and not stressful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81879194631 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68015577708 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8375644066 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32851913577 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108797856923 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753276409992 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186419449681 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533645550209 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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