Parents have always been concerned about their children’s education and in order to provide help, they get involved too. But is it true that parents are more involved today as compared to the past or is it just a myth? Some people think that it is incorrect that parents are more involved now as they believe that they have always been anxious about children’s future. However, I strongly believe that it s true that parents are more involved in today’s world.
To begin with, when there is more competition, there is more insecurity and this makes a parent overprotective for their kids. In today’s modern world, it is quite intricate to survive as it was in the past. Now, people have to have excellent in their respective fields and prove themselves as best. Otherwise, there is less scope for them to get a good job. On the other hand, in earlier days, situation was not this troublesome for example my grandfather was not highly educated indeed he was a farmer. He used to live in a village with limited facilities but he lived a good life as at that time everything was inexpensive. But now it is difficult to live a simple life as everything is expensive.
In addition, earlier parents were not educated themselves and so they never insisted children much to study. In modern world, most of the parents are highly qualified and they know the significance of education unlike parents in the past who were not aware of the consequences of not being educated as they had many options which did not require much studying. I can recall my grandfather always used to tell me to relax and not study all the time unlike my dad. He even used to tell me many options to live a decent life in village without having higher degree. Although, he wanted me to study but never pushed me into it like my father. There was certainly a lot of generation gap that I observed that affected their thoughts.
To recapitulate, although there are many who believe that importance of education has always been same. I disagree; I think that because of cut throat competition, people now certainly are more aware about the benefits of educating their children than before. I can say this firmly that now parents are also educated and so they want their children to do even better. Earlier, people were not so educated and so they never used to bother that much about their children’s education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...observed that affected their thoughts. To recapitulate, although there are many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75656324582 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72786620586 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443914081146 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5650387369 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9047619048 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255395426093 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854926718433 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736133733207 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169619072377 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640806036601 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
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Rates: 60 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18 Out of 30
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