It is a well-known fact in the society that parents want their children to be prosper.They consiously intervene in their education. There are some people who believe that they involve in children's eduction than were parents in the past, but there are some people who hold the opposit opinion.As far as I am concerned, parents today are more engaged in their children's education than were parents in the past because not only they are more learned than before generation, but also they want their children more adapted to new conditions.
The first subtle point which deserves some words here is that parents are highly educated than they were before. The education system allows fair distribution of decent education. Moreover, the mankind in the shadow of international peace and global immunity is wealthier than last century. Therefore, all mankind can persue his or her educational life easily. In this context, well-educated parents are plentiful nowadays. Therefore, they put more control and demand more hard work from their children. Because, they are familiar more with the context and courses. In this way, they can monitor their children's grades.
Another point which should be mentioned here is that as the global wealth accumulated more and more, the living condition varies more than what seemed before. Neeless to describe, when the education system facilates high educated people to step in, finding job become more perplex than what was before. In other words, companies and other empolyers would look for more talented employee. Therefore, parents knowing these conditions put more pressure to their children. Consequently they involved more in the children education in order to adapt their education to the society's job requisits. For instance, in the past, parents made their children to persue their talent or internal voice to select a job, yet nowadays parent sugget that they should have a glance to job market before selecting a major in college , even in high school.
In final analysis,nowadays parent are more involved in their children's education in order to set them up for society's requirements. More educated parents, more pressure and involvment in their educational life. It is recommended for goverment to help parents to find the best for their children.
- Tpo 22 integrated writing 73
- The rules that today s societies expect young people to follow and obey are too strict 93
- Tpo 28- integrated writing 95
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantage? 84
- tpo 27 86
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2457002457 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.142506142506 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0982800982801 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0712530712531 0.046263068375 154% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0687960687961 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113022113022 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.022113022113 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68812363626 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031941031941 0.0309702414327 103% => OK
Particles: 0.002457002457 0.00188951952338 130% => OK
Determiners: 0.0687960687961 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012285012285 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.019656019656 0.0139019557991 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2300.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 368.0 408.028673835 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391304347826 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304347826087 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211956521739 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14402173913 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68812363626 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513586956522 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.285592235 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3684210526 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2936784077 48.84282405 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.052631579 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 49.8032036613 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.34782608696 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440341929748 0.300154397459 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116549239069 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100195320841 0.0752933317313 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.480862458866 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171955112686 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169573317169 0.114077575197 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767103218768 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.447069399935 0.336927656856 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0661143915913 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329460057061 0.210909579961 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317627806758 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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