In today's modern world education is most important part in our life, it is not doubtful, good education give betterment in our carriers. From ancient period to modern world parent are more concentrating on their kids studies but when measure who is more concern about their children carrier whether earlier parents or today's parent then answer is definitely today's parents giving much important for their kids education. In order to prove my statements, I want to explore historical events.
First of all, earlier people used to their parents jobs like business, native medicine, trading and so on. So, that time parents are least bother about their study because they have enough wealth and business for their kids and further female never went to any kind jobs simply they did house choir jobs that is reason older parents least important to their kids education. After, industrial revolution there was plenty job opening in larger scale that made the trend to change in diverse ways. Thereafter, our modern parents started concentrating on their children education very intensively.
Secondly, Nowadays to get menial jobs also company are looking for the minimum qualification so that the worker can work more diplomatically than workers. Further, some of the parents are resigning their job for their children education, for example near my house one lady quit the job in order to teach son who studying tenth grade. She told that this is the crucial exam for her son so she less care about her job, if, son gets "A "grade in the class that is more than enough for her. Earlier parents they did not do like that. They say if he gets good marks "OK", if not also no problem for them.
Thirdly, today's world is full competition not like earlier time. For the decent survive everyone must have some degree in their hands and modern parents well aware about it. Further, they know the negative consequence of illiterate so that reasons they are concentrating and spending time on their children education rather than personal activities whereas older parents, they just very much interested in their social prestige and dignity.
Finally, more modern parents sending their further higher study to other countries, recently, the rate of studying in abroad increased dramatically. This shows that modern parents more concentrating on their children than older parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the least'.
Suggestion: are the least
...rading and so on. So, that time parents are least bother about their study because they h...
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Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...east important to their kids education. After, industrial revolution there was plenty...
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Line 6, column 165, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e diplomatically than workers. Further, some of the parents are resigning their job for the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268792710706 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.116173120729 0.158761421928 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113895216401 0.0866891130778 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0774487471526 0.046263068375 167% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0842824601367 0.0685040099705 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127562642369 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0318906605923 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54664846713 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227790432802 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0432801822323 0.0887237588012 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00455580865604 0.0209618222197 22% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0136674259681 0.0139019557991 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2396.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 389.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15938303342 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362467866324 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26735218509 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161953727506 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105398457584 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54664846713 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542416452442 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.0713195084 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8823529412 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9927624363 48.84282405 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.941176471 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.644075263715 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.6175714502 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.54098360656 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330800043829 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0936025143284 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0746809542544 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519285822763 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176627793914 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127705463242 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535521455888 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278278817219 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0213594996455 0.067059652881 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221486378001 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101981538213 0.0618886996521 16% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.