When we want to start a discussion about, how improve the quality of education we faced on many reasons, some people agree to increase the salaries of professors and that’s not a bad idea because they roll is the most important thing in our process but the problem is, all the salary should have a balance and it’s so weird if one job goes up too much. On the other hand, another thing that change lots of things is, educational system if all the rules in that system change it will improve more than other changes. I know that it’s confusing so let me paraphrase it, but before that, if someone ask my idea, I think all the things depends on students and their country they live.
First, change educational system, there are lots of feedback, and not always positive, when we change educational system we should teach our teachers to how behave to students. let me explain it with an example, in Canada students on 6th class doesn’t have any book or exam the teacher in there never ask to do homework’s and also their schools don’t have any chairs to forced them to sit, they can lie down and they allow to eat in class and after that when they get 12 they take exam of normal schools if they like to continue it or not, because some of them like to working at farm or something like that because in that 6 years the teachers teach them how be kind and what their talent is? And they can understand what are they like to do in future.
Second, when we’re talking about students and how improve the educational situations, we faced on sort of problems that no one could solve them. For example, when a child lives in bad conditions without basic facilities, they cannot study well, such as working children in street. Just the government can change that situation.
In conclusion, there are many ways to improve the student's academic environment, but they must be well measured. Hope for good days’ come one day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 612, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...aphrase it, but before that, if someone ask my idea, I think all the things depends...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...our teachers to how behave to students. let me explain it with an example, in Canad...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: eating
...o sit, they can lie down and they allow to eat in class and after that when they get 1...
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Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...can understand what are they like to do in future. Second, when we're talking abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, another thing, for example, i think, in conclusion, sort of, such as, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64367816092 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48632805355 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548850574713 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.455163282 48.9658058833 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.909090909 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 5.45110844103 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0478880307305 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189714953426 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223709431755 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0292919142284 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171838933138 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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