Development of quality of education depend on professors, some people agree that universities should increase salaries of professors because of advancement of education and some disagree, in my opinion, if salaries of professors increase, motivative and efficiency of them is better. In the following essay, I will explore these two reasons in detail.
First of all, more salary cause professor focus of better education of students and motivate them. For example, when I was professor in university two years age, my salary was not very well and I had not any motivate attended in class on time and felt myself classes was boring and repetitive and students had not sufficient concentration of matter.
Secondly, If salary of professor increase efficiency of education is better amazingly, take myself as an example again, next semester my salary increased and I responsibility for education because administrative of university spend money for better education, not only grade of students had better but also I worked with interest. Furthermore, education system in general advance rather than past.
In conclusion, I believe education centers should increase salary of professors for two main reasons, motivation and efficiency cause better education environment and professors have responsibility for better education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64676616915 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1173908624 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.200682932 48.9658058833 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.142857143 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.5714285714 5.45110844103 341% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137106780943 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066375525672 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485201701535 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949052510348 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478372012718 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 11.7677419355 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 58.1214874552 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 10.1575268817 175% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 10.9000537634 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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