Independent TOEFL essay - TPO 13: A/D? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
education has played a prevailing role in every individual’s life. children’s training has a direct relation with their developmental stage and parents can impact on their kid’s education productively. Although some might believe that parents today are not more engage in their children’s education, I firmly contend that the opposite is true. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most important reasons.
First, parents are more cognizant rather than the past that caused they be more sensitive about their children’s studies. because in today’s lifestyle level of literacy of parents increased and they ease the path for further educational achievements for their kids and monitoring the performance of them carefully.
Second, nowadays parents have less children that result in they spend more time with them. In comparison to the past, because of the large number of kids, parents were unable to help each of them effectively, so parents were less involved in their issues like education and could not provide more training opportunities for them.
In conclusion, I really believe that today parents assist more their children in schooling. because they are more knowledgeable and have fewer kids than the past and therefore they have more time and energy for educational progress of their children. that is why I think nowadays parents are more engage in their children’s teaching.
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- TPO 37 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ring the performance of them carefully. Second, nowadays parents have less child...
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...gage in their children's teaching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52036199095 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10975299112 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542986425339 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.588005525 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0436438504818 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021300901087 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239602284398 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327268953907 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126639909461 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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