TPO-29:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern era, education has played a prominent role in all societies. Due to it is paramount importance, researchers suggested many ideas to provoke the quality of education. A controversial question which is often raised this idea that whether to improve the wage of people who study in the university can improve the quality of the education or not. I personally contend that professors have a direct effect on the quality of education; therefore, I agree with this opinion. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite factor to be mentioned is that the professors are a key role to improve the quality of instruction; hence, they need a high range of salary. To elaborate on my point, since professors spend the most time in the university, they must have a high range wage which can focus on the science; hence, they do not need second jobs or part-time jobs to earn extra money. As we know, in the highest rank university such as MIT or Cambridge, the students must pay high tuition so that the university spend most this money for paying professors' salary. Also, the youngest people entire to the university every year, if the professors do not have a high salary, they may not learn the lessons in the high quality to the students; so the quality of the education is increased. A significant example that strikes in my mind is about my father. He is teaching at the university as the professor. he works full time for the university, and he is satisfying about his wage. Hence, he works with full energy to improve the quality of the education. Unless he has a benefit salary, he must find a second job to improve the level of our life. For this reason, he would not work at university full time to improve the quality of the learning.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that the university professors enhance the quality of the instruction by publishing many papers and books since people want to write some materials such as papers and books, they need many times and energy; hence, the professors must have a high salary to concentrate on this project. Also, it is obvious that the most crucial problems are solved by people who work at the university as the teachers. They are spending many times in the laboratory and library so that they must have the high quality of the laboratory equipment for better working. This purpose needs high money to achieve.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that to improve the quality of the education should spend high salary to the professors. I believe that the professors not only have the key factor to improve the quality of the learning but also have an important role to solve crucial problems.
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- TOEFL TPO 45 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO 42 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: He
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Suggestion: fulltime
...e university as the professor. he works full time for the university, and he is satisfyin...
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...reason, he would not work at university full time to improve the quality of the learning....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76348547718 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66868535244 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42531120332 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7558366931 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228373918491 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777729284226 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523834468314 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148377732902 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266609809037 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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