Jobs play a vital important role in our life, because it provides not only basic financial basis for us, but also a sense of fulfillment in professional career. However, how we improve the enjoyment brought from jobs is discussed fiercely. Some argues that five days work for short hour is more fun than the long-hour work in fewer days. I side against this view.
More holidays bring us more chances to do other meaningful thing, like photograph, swimming and playing with our children. Due to the time reason, we often lack suitable time to exercise. For example, the golden time for excising is between 3 to 5 pm every day, especially in good air condition day, while we still sit at office and image we can do it at weekends. But after five days hardly working, we need to relax, so many people choose to stay at home, sleeping or watching video. Thus, more than two rest days for workers is much more enjoyable.
Long hour working each day helps us concentrate on tasks, increasing the efficiency of work.
There are many tasks we need to solve need constant thinking, so a longer time for working each day is vital for a high efficient work. Take programmer for an example. As we know, the code logic is so complex that engineers require a long time frame to deal with. If they are interrupted by other annoyed things such as meeting, most of them need to spend another hour to pick up what they have written down. A longer work hour benefits them for completing the requirements from the product manager.
Admittedly, a short hour work contributes to release the distress brought by work. Due to less tasks, people cost less energy every work day. Nevertheless, though company require that staffs work, for example, 8 hours, people actually spend more than it to fulfill requirements. Thus a long hour work day is more fair for every worker.
All in all, though working for shorter hours in more days sometimes give us relief, a long hour working each day is better choice so that we have more time to do with our interests and fulfill requirements during work time without extra hours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun tasks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...se the distress brought by work. Due to less tasks, people cost less energy every wo...
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Line 8, column 281, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... more than it to fulfill requirements. Thus a long hour work day is more fair for e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6846361186 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44861460555 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2547314889 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332272613561 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110805596218 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779100422397 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203578303189 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429383130738 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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