People often hold different views on whether we would be happier if we work three days a week for long hours than five days a week for shorter hours. Based on personal experience of my life, I disagree with the saying that it will be enjoyable to work three days a week for long hours since I care about work-life balance, take my health seriously, and like to eat dinner at a restaurant.
First of all, I care about work-life balance and working five days a week for shorter hours makes me happier. There are lots of things I would like to do after work. For example, I am a fan of jogging and jogging along the river can ease my pressure from works. That is to say, I don't have to worry about the upcoming presentation and enjoy my own time. If I work for longer hours, I will not have time to do exercise. Thus, I can't escape from my works and I will definitely be really upset.
Secondly, being healthy is the key to me and working longer hours harms my health. According to the news, sitting on a chair all day without exercising will increase the chance to get fat and cardiovascular diseases. What's more, I can't go to the gym after work at ten o'clock since it is more likely for the gym to be closed at that time. As a consequence, I won't live happily without having a healthy body. If I work three days a week for shorter hours, I can go to the gym after work. Hence, I will be satisfied with my body figure and the good status of my health.
Last but not least, the thing I want to do after work is going to a restaurant and having a shorter working time enables me to eat at a restaurant after work. It is really delightful to have a delicious dinner, tasting Italian cuisine and cheesy hamburger after work. If I have to work three days for long hours, it is possible that I have to eat at the office. As a consequence, I have to eat cereal with milk for dinner rather than hot fresh food at the restaurant. It really brings me a bad mood.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that we will be more delighted if I work three days a week for long hours. That is to say, I take emphasis on work-life balance, my health, and dinner at a restaurant.
- TPO 54 Independent Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- TPO 30 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours Use spec 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... pressure from works. That is to say, I dont have to worry about the upcoming presen...
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Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l not have time to do exercise. Thus, I cant escape from my works and I will definit...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...to get fat and cardiovascular diseases. Whats more, I cant go to the gym after work a...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... cardiovascular diseases. Whats more, I cant go to the gym after work at ten oclock ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... I cant go to the gym after work at ten oclock since it is more likely for the gym to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20722891566 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42679913521 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424096385542 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4393925595 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1428571429 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340513862691 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124462231466 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972451204479 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237629238145 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504124556747 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.