People often hold different views on whether the governments should spend money to improve internet access or public transportation. Based on my personal experience, I strongly agree that the governments should put more budget on improving internet access since the government cares about their reputation, the education of the people, and better national economic growth.
First of all, the governments care about their reputation, and better access for everyone to go online will make the citizen satisfied. Since the prevalence of the smartphone and personal computer, people nowadays rely on the internet to connect with friends. For example, I am a heavy user of the internet. I enjoy chatting with my friends on messenger and sharing my daily life on Instagram. Thanks to the investment of the government in establishing the internet throughout my country, I can use the internet anywhere. On the other hand, if the government spend more money on public transportation, I can't chat with my friend in New York and make connections with them.
Secondly, education is vital in modern society, so more access to the internet means we can get more information from the internet. For example, my cousin, Tom, is a middle school student. He likes to read the news and study extracurricular knowledge on the internet. Besides, he uses the online teaching platform, Coursera, to self-learn computer science and data analysis. By doing so, he is adept at coding and able to make an application on his own. If there is no accessible internet for him, he has to spend a lot of money to learn computer science and coding in the cram school, which is not affordable for a student in his age.
Last but not least, for the growth of the national economy, it is important to have better access to the internet with faster speed. To be more precise, it is a global village and the economy of nations all over the planet are interwoven together. The nation which has the latest information can earn more money by transaction in the stock market. For example, if there is a war in middle-east Asia, we can expect that the price of crude oil will increase due to warfare. Without first-handed information, the government might make the wrong decision, which will hamper economic growth.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the government should spend money to improve internet access. That is to say, the government cares about their reputation, the education of the people, and better national economic growth and better access to the internet make their people satisfied, learn more knowledge, and earn more money.
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- TPO 54 Independent Writing Task 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... more money on public transportation, I cant chat with my friend in New York and mak...
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Line 5, column 570, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to learn computer science and coding in the cram school, which is not affordable for a s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02764976959 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82841210832 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476958525346 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3131604038 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.904761905 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301990838345 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970699707786 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783055757852 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189743983209 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547089410697 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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