TPO 31- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I am absolutely agreed. Looking at the past and comprising our parent's attitude with our genration's, demonstrates that the past generations were happier than us. Moreover, when I listen to some memories that elederly people say, I feel regret that I borned in this era. There are some reasons to support my opinion as follows:
Groundbreaking technologies makes the life easier, but, would reduce the happiness and the society's freshness. For instance, there are some social networks which help youths to socialize and share their moments with the friends; According to academic researches, these tools, not only reduce the happiness, but also would put the mental health in danger; They can make the users think of other's luck and induce sadness to them. On the better word, they propel teens to comprise their life with others and if the person feel some defects, he or she would get depressed. Actually, increasing the ease of the life, would not turn the world into a better place essentialy; Needless to say, communicating among people is less than past, because they meet each other by chating and, real senses and love are not interchange as well as the past. So, virtuall world and fast communicating methods could be negative points which take our happiness and in turn, give us solitary.
Quick changing always comes with some inadvertently mistakes that affect humanity and people's relationships. As an analogy, the relation between quick changing and the spiritual health of people, looks like to a pearson who is typing with computer; The fast typing is equal to more mistakes. For example, before inventing the social networks, no one has tought that they can lead a collapse in intimate relationships and, it was a mistake!
Of course, quick progressing of technologies brings some indispensable benefits like turning the world to a village or solving other health problems. Were it not for scientist efforts to discover vaccinating profits, many children would not be alive.
All in all, it is a crucial issue that human should get used to utilizing technological facilities properly. I am agreed with the statement because I think the bad effects of some facilities are more than their good aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08493150685 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75559241321 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61095890411 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2408682579 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.571428571 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216751539609 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691328516303 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054696267573 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106590141115 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440902781482 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.