Tpo 31 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
In fact, consistent change in the world has turned into a controversial issue during recent decades as far as it caused people to be less enthusiastic to continue the life and they feel depression; actually, the life expectancy extremely has declined because of such an unpredictable change. Although in this technological era, changes contribute us to live more convenient,
In my view point, there are many reason including the value of currency of home-country, lack of a stable position and condition and inability of choosing a specific goal, which lead people to be less satisfied. those claim not only are the personal views but many researchers have proved the strength of them on societies and people lives.
Actually, inflation is counted as a vital factor that adversely have effected people life in third-world country like Iran. Quality of life has declined the quality of life; moreover, people have encounter many financial problem during recent years; indeed, the change in the currency value definitely have altered the amount of things that people can parches. For instance, some years ago people enabled to buy one kilogram of meat by a specific amount of money; whereas, nowadays they can buy less than half of that by same amount of money; hence, people believe that not only haven't they improved during recent years but they also have lost their position in society; furthermore, the quality of their life considerably is disappointed.
Indeed, people have face to such an adverse financial situation which lead them to can't have a stable position in their work place because of a hundred of companies and factories were obliged to be closed; hence they not only are enabled to choose an aim but the target gradually become smaller and smaller. Ultimately, they completely will give up the aim; thus people are unhappy and also they are depressed nowadays; they even don't have a simple target in order to try for achieving.
All in all, I myself believe the results of changing in different country may be various; nevertheless, in my home-country albeit there are some positive changes, a vast majority of changes have influence lives negatively; therefore, I agree with the mentioned idea because inflation as a huge change not only reduce life expectancy but limit people's wishes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...nvenient, In my view point, there are many reason including the value of currency of home...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
...which lead people to be less satisfied. those claim not only are the personal views b...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'encountered'.
Suggestion: encountered
... quality of life; moreover, people have encounter many financial problem during recent ye...
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Line 7, column 580, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ey; hence, people believe that not only havent they improved during recent years but t...
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Line 11, column 21, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
... disappointed. Indeed, people have face to such an adverse financial situation ...
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Line 11, column 84, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... financial situation which lead them to cant have a stable position in their work pl...
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Line 11, column 431, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... they are depressed nowadays; they even dont have a simple target in order to try fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, third, thus, whereas, for instance, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14511873351 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73544669065 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543535620053 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9831444713 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 216.666666667 100.406767564 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.1111111111 20.6045352989 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.45110844103 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201984422915 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871266194106 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332510761853 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114606362958 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301558352158 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 11.7677419355 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 58.1214874552 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.247311828 234% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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