TPO-31
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Changing is very common in any generation of the world; however, this rate is so high in this twentieth century. People are improving themselves by any means, and wanting to emulate each other. As a result, many people think that this changing helps them to be happy, but other think antithetically. As per as I concern, I would say that this fickleness of this time creates many problems which lead people to be unhappy. I think this way for several reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, nowadays, people always desire to copy others and this is responsible for being unsatisfied all time. This trend was not present last century and this is very bad for the people who do not believe in themselves. If you look at any society, you will see this phenomenon occurring every place. This is because now people show up themselves in the social media like Facebook, Whats'up, and different blogs. As a result, people become frustrated when they show that his friends are doing better day by day even that is not true practically. So, they have to live an unhappy life. On the other hand, in the past people did not have any such medium to know about other and all worked for each other. As a result, they enjoyed their life very much.
Secondly, we do not get enough time to spend with our family and this reason is also responsible for being unhappy now. People from the last generation was happier because had spent more effective time with time and enjoy visiting many places, and creating many new things altogether. Conversely, now we work the whole day to enhance our financial condition so that we can compare ourselves with others. And the rapid changing is the main reasons for it. We work hard till early in the morning to till midnight, yet we are not satisfied with our status and want more and more. As a result, we never manage time to look after our family which is one of the important places of our life. So, this apathy from family leads us to an unhappy life.
It is clear; we need to be careful about the changing occur in the world so that this improving cannot hamper our happy life. Also, it is evident that people are less satisfied with themselves than the last century people. This is because they tend to emulate other and spend more time on improving their economic status, and this leads them to spend their whole life without enjoying life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, i think, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59302325581 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30655120794 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493023255814 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8520772434 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8695652174 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6956521739 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212557187979 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672179042855 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509632700143 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139889945066 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393249239903 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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