Today, young people have influence on the future of their society from different angles. They choose their representatives by election, the right of protest has been given to young people, and also they can change the future of the society through education.
The government representatives are chosen through public elections. In every country, people in the society, especially the youth, go tho the polls in order to choose their representatives. Two years ago, the presidential elections was conducted in my country and I voted to my favorite president. Therefore, I played a vital role in the future of my country.
Youth can protest to the government policies. Sometimes, heads of states adopt rules which are against of people's desires. Thus, they will protest against these policies and try to change them. In the last year, my government tried to increase the price of bread. As a result, people decided not to buy bread for two days and tried to show their disagreement with the policy.
Education enables the young people to change the future of society. Today, as the technology is progressing fast, each society needs to educational people in order to be successful and adopt with the technological changes. Most societies are hiring educated young people in their government institutions and use their knowledge in order to compete with the other countries. Hence, young people are taken part in the important decisions that determine the future of society.
I strongly believe that, young people have the responsibility to build the future of their country. Today, the heads of states are elected through public elections. If the government policies are against of people's desires, they have the right of protest, and also young people can play a vital role in the future of society through their education.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275449101796 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.14371257485 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658682634731 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0269461077844 0.046263068375 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.059880239521 0.0685040099705 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131736526946 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0269461077844 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80595241061 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0389221556886 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0988023952096 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119760479042 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0059880239521 0.0139019557991 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1822.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 297.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13468013468 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383838383838 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26936026936 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181818181818 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127946127946 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80595241061 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.1446727055 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7540664897 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 43.436026936 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.88311688312 1.45489161554 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313896641713 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138428335352 0.103427244359 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0765207277901 0.0752933317313 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601870864303 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141569359875 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150889372985 0.114077575197 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652937590644 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388836881456 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0859116869793 0.067059652881 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233241555967 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486793532266 0.0618886996521 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.