In my view, in each society young people are the most important group for determining the future of that society. Because they are young, healthy, full of energy, enthusiasm for changing the world and have more knowledge than children. Hence, they are very impressive in making decisions in each society. I have this opinion because of the following reasons.
First of all, I think the most important properties of the young people is that they have a lot of dreams of changing the world. This changing can be in the technology, science, politic, economy, fashion and other fields in each society. For example, a young person that study politics have a lot of ideas and goals for correcting the politic system of his or her society.
My second reason is that youth people are full of energy, therefore they can do anything that they want. They usually are mentally and bodily healthier and stronger than other groups, hence they are able to work or study for a lot of hours and days without being tired. By this way, they can fight for their goals and dreams, consequently, they will attain to their goals in the near future.
Finally, most of the youths do not like to live like their previous generation, hence they try to change their manner of life. Each generation in a society, have special needs and demands; also they usually do not like to tolerate their ancestor's wrong decisions. Therefore, they make their own decisions to form a new society.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the youths are the most impressive people in each society, because of the special mental and body properties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...ey can do anything that they want. They usually are mentally and bodily healthier and stron...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46067580876 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4711305323 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105205889326 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494497836185 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477423872866 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664503401541 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479354513632 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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