There is no gainsaying that young people are an integral part of each society population. There are controversial debates about the young people role and importance in society; some people believe that young people have no crucial role in making important decision, on the contrary some people hold opposite view and believe young people have a pivotal role for making decision about the future of society. From my perspective, undoubtedly, young people have undeniable role in each society especially about important decision about the future. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that the great majority of in the many societies are young and societies are not capable to make decision about the future of the society regardless of young people expectations. In better words, each society attach a great importance to its population consideration. For example, most of the politician attempt hard to convince people for election and they know that if they want to be winner in elections, they should care about young people expectation. Therefore, young people are multitude enough that societies consider their ideas about the important decisions.
Second point that comes to my mind is that young people are have a key role in the families as children. To put in apposite words, each society is formed by families and families make decision about the societies. In this respect, young people are able to persuade their parents and other families' members about the important decision. For example, when I was a teenage and I was not allowed to participate an referendum about the care policy, but I could convince my parents to say yes to this policy. Hence, young people are able to participate in important decision indirectly via families.
Last but not least, these days, there are some changes in political conditions. In the past, just old and middle aged people worked as politician while that young people have more responsibilities as minister, prime minister, president etc. in states these days. In other words, young people have more striking role in policy, economic, trade etc. Therefore, young people have more role for making decision than past.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned paragraphs, these days, young people have a crucial role for making decision about the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ge and I was not allowed to participate an referendum about the care policy, but I...
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... role for making decision than past. In conclusion, contemplating all aforement...
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Suggestion:
...e for making decision about the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25459317585 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7454469718 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44094488189 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8596182775 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.368421053 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216661017722 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854577221086 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567085775144 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1419175869 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410654164095 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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