TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.Use spe

There are number of wayspeople can learn some prefer to learn in groups some may like study alone.As for as I am concern I believe that group study is more effective than study alone.I would like to illustrate few reasons as follows.

To begin with, in study togather students can learn from other members of group. Every person have there own level of knowledge,student can shear information and learn fast.Study indicates that students who shear knowleg it,s remain long lasting in memories and gives them better and deeper understanding of subjects.for instance,when i was in universitie I learnt those things from study with friends I still remember after many years this shows that efcectiveness of assign study crew.
In addition to learn from others, working in groups students can able to save precious time for other things such as study other subjects.They may able to give equall time to all academic courses instead of focusing only one subject and spends hours on it.Distribuation of work they can search material for projects in short period of time hance,plenty of time they have for other study related activaties.
By way of conclusion, assign studies togather enable students to lean fast and long lasting impact on memories also they can save time for other area of study.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...her things such as study other subjects.They may able to give equall time to all aca...
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...only one subject and spends hours on it.Distribuation of work they can search material for p...
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...buation of work they can search material for projects in short period of time han...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'as for', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in short', 'such as', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.304347826087 0.229887763892 132% => OK
Verbs: 0.152173913043 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113043478261 0.0866891130778 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0260869565217 0.046263068375 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0391304347826 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.173913043478 0.118717715034 146% => OK
Participles: 0.00869565217391 0.0351676179071 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.76736925716 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347826086957 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0217391304348 0.0887237588012 25% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0391304347826 0.0209618222197 187% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00869565217391 0.0139019557991 63% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1300.0 2387.08602151 54% => OK
No of words: 214.0 408.028673835 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07476635514 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.48200974243 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331775700935 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233644859813 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158878504673 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0794392523364 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76736925716 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 58.6668755755 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6684587814 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 42.8 20.5533526081 208% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 131.230179456 48.84282405 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 120.699889404 215% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8 20.5533526081 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.644075263715 311% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.54480286738 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 66.1644859813 45.7405998639 145% => OK
Elegance: 2.24 1.45489161554 154% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135963178357 0.300154397459 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.232759885293 0.103427244359 225% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0635455907149 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.891989605061 0.497263757937 179% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183108400208 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090024759518 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190790979737 0.0781384742642 24% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302927168046 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0560510291691 0.067059652881 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930657442721 0.210909579961 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113562157991 0.0618886996521 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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